Modals + perfect — should have been monitored / could have been prevented
Mixed conditionals — If tougher sentences had been imposed, recidivism rates wouldn't be this high now
Cleft sentences — It is justice — not revenge — that the law must serve
Concession clauses — Despite evidence that long sentences deter few crimes, public pressure demands severity
Subjunctive — It is essential that every offender be assessed individually / Were the system to change…
Inversion — Not only did the system fail him — it failed his victims / Never before has recidivism been so high
It is argued that incarceration alone does not reduce reoffending.
Rehabilitation is said to be more effective than punitive sentencing.
The judiciary is believed to favour longer sentences in high-profile cases.
Key verbs: argued · claimed · suggested · believed · reported · alleged · known · understood
He should have been monitored more closely after release.
The reoffence could have been prevented with better support structures.
The parole board might have known the risk was higher than reported.
The victim needn't have suffered if the system had functioned as designed.
Past condition → present result:
If the rehabilitation programme had been properly funded, recidivism rates wouldn't be at a forty-year high now.
Present condition → past result:
If the judiciary weren't so reluctant to impose community sentences, the prison system would have collapsed under its own weight years ago.
It is essential that every offender be assessed individually. (NOT is)
It is imperative that the parole board review its criteria.
Were the justice system to prioritise rehabilitation, outcomes would improve significantly. (formal hypothetical)
Not only did the system fail the offender — it failed every potential future victim.
Never before has the gap between public opinion and criminological evidence been so stark.
Rarely does a single case expose so many systemic failures simultaneously.
Only when the public understands the evidence will meaningful reform be possible.
· Passive reporting: It is widely argued / It is believed / It is claimed / is said to matter most
· Modals + perfect: should have been supervised / Could have been prevented / should have had a future
· Mixed conditional: if his programme had been properly resourced (implied / direct) / Were the judiciary to focus (G6)
· Cleft: It is proportionality — not severity — that is said to matter / It is not the sentence that defines justice
· Concession: Despite what the experts say / Granted that both of you want justice
· Subjunctive: It is essential that this court acknowledge / Were the judiciary to focus
· Inversion: Not only did the system fail to support him / Rarely does the length of a sentence enter / Never before has the gap been this wide / only when the public sees accountability will trust begin
Ex 2: 1. is argued to reduce 2. should have been monitored 3. had been funded / wouldn't be 4. It is justice that 5. Despite the evidence 6. that every offender be 7. Never before has 8. could have been prevented 9. Were the system to 10. Not only did
Ex 3 (inversion): 1. Not only did the system fail the offender — it failed his victims too. 2. Never before has recidivism been so closely linked to underfunding. 3. Rarely do long sentences deter crimes committed in the heat of the moment. 4. Only when the justice system is properly funded will recidivism rates fall.
Ex 4 (subjunctive): 1. be (NOT is) 2. review (NOT reviews) 3. Were (NOT If it was) 4. acknowledge (NOT acknowledges) 5. be (NOT is)
Ex 5 (errors): 1. is argued to have increased (NOT to have) 2. should have been monitored (NOT should been) 3. weren't / would have collapsed (mixed conditional) 4. It is justice that (NOT what) 5. Never before has (singular subject — recidivism)
Task 2: (1) is widely argued / properly resourced (2) proportionality / not severity (3) were the judiciary to focus (4) essential / acknowledge (5) never before / gap between evidence and opinion
Punishment
Vocabulary
VocabularyGrammar
GrammarReport claims or evidence without committing to them — essential in law and journalism.
It is argued that incarceration alone does not reduce reoffending.
Rehabilitation is said to be more effective than punitive sentencing in most cases.
The judiciary is believed to favour longer sentences in high-profile cases.
Key verbs: argued · claimed · alleged · believed · reported · suggested · known · said
Criticise past failures of the justice system or speculate about what was possible.
He should have been monitored more closely after release.
The reoffence could have been prevented with better support structures.
The parole board might have known the risk was higher than reported.
The victim needn't have suffered if the system had worked as designed.
Link past failures in the system to present consequences.
If the rehabilitation programme had been properly funded, recidivism rates wouldn't be at a forty-year high now.
[past condition: If + past perfect] → [present result: would + infinitive]
If the judiciary weren't so reluctant to impose community sentences, the prison system would have collapsed years ago.
[present condition: If + past simple] → [past result: would + have + pp]
Emphasise the key element of an argument.
It is justice — not revenge — that the law must serve.
It is proportionality — not severity — that is said to matter most in sentencing.
What the evidence shows is that longer sentences do not reduce recidivism.
It was the failure of post-release support that led directly to this reoffence.
Acknowledge the opposing view before making your argument.
Despite evidence that long sentences deter few crimes, public pressure demands severity.
Although rehabilitation is costly, the long-term savings from reduced recidivism are significant.
Granted that victims deserve acknowledgement, the law cannot be driven by vengeance.
While public opinion favours harsher sentencing, the evidence points elsewhere.
Policy demands and formal legal language.
It is essential that every offender be assessed individually. (NOT is)
It is imperative that the parole board review its risk criteria. (NOT reviews)
Were the justice system to prioritise rehabilitation, outcomes would improve significantly.
'Were + subject + to + infinitive' = formal hypothetical conditional
Emphasis and formal written register — common in journalism and legal argument.
Not only did the system fail the offender — it failed every future victim.
Never before has the gap between public opinion and criminological evidence been so stark.
Rarely does a single case expose so many systemic failures simultaneously.
Only when the public understands the evidence will meaningful reform be possible.
Use the structure indicated in brackets.
Rewrite using inversion for emphasis.
Choose the correct form.
Reading
ReadingWrite full sentences.
Listening
ListeningInterview Notes
Find one example of each structure. Write the exact words.
Speaking
SpeakingGroups of four. Each person takes one role. Debate the appropriate sentence for tomorrow's case. Use all seven grammar structures.
Role 1 — The Judge
Weighing all arguments — must give a decision.
- It is essential that the sentence be proportionate [G6]
- It is justice — not public opinion — that must guide [G4]
- Despite calls for the maximum, evidence suggests… [G5]
- Not only must the court address the crime [G7]
Role 2 — The Prosecution
Arguing for a severe sentence.
- He should have been kept in prison [G2]
- It is claimed that rehabilitation failed here [G1]
- Never before has such clear evidence of risk been ignored [G7]
- If the first sentence had been longer, this wouldn't have happened [G3]
Role 3 — The Defence
Arguing for rehabilitation over incarceration.
- It is argued that the system failed him [G1]
- He could have been supported differently [G2]
- Were the court to impose maximum, recidivism would rise [G6]
- Granted that the harm was severe, culpability must be assessed [G5]
Role 4 — The Victim's Family
Speaking from loss — demanding acknowledgement.
- My son should have had a future [G2]
- It is accountability that we demand [G4]
- Despite what experts say, this is also about human dignity [G5]
- Only when this court acts will justice begin [G7]
In groups of three, discuss. Which matters most — and why? Use all seven structures.
Deterrence — punishment prevents future crime
Rehabilitation — the offender must be changed, not just punished
Incapacitation — dangerous people must be removed from society
Writing
WritingOption A — Opinion Column: Write Kate's column — the night before the sentencing. What should the judge do? What should punishment be for?
Option B — Analytical Essay: "Rehabilitation is a more effective response to crime than incarceration. Discuss."
Word count: 120–150 words
G1 Passive reporting G2 Modals+perfect G3 Mixed conditional G4 Cleft
G5 Concession G6 Subjunctive G7 Inversion
Plus at least SIX vocabulary words from Handout 1
Option A structure: The case → what the evidence says → what justice requires → what must change
Option B structure: Thesis → evidence for → concession → counter-argument → conclusion with inversion

